- Site does not fit 1024x786. You have to scroll to the right to see the blue bar.
- Why do you have two sets of AsSense bars?
- Better question yet, why are you letting other people advertise on your business site at all?
- The header colors don't seem like they match the blue of the bars.
- The first page seems to take some time to load. You might have some dial-up visitors run away before the page loads.
-There is a LOT of information to digest on that first page. Break it out.
- The "ad" graphic in the middle of the page seems like something you're putting on a billboard but you have it stuck in the middle of your website. If that image has content then it needs to be active. My suggestion would be to turn that graphic into the majority of the content for the main page
Overall I'd say this - you have*excellent* content, you just need to organize it better and make it more web-friendly. Building a website isn't just taking what you've got in print and poster media and putting it into HTML. You have to plan your site more for a web audience.
Great start though! :third: